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Wednesday, 17 August 2011

compare and contrast 2

Do you want to go to a camp? Where? Camp Big Apple? Ranch West Camp? Head Start Splash? There are three camps, and we can use comparing and contrasting to choose one camp. I will compare and contrast each camps.

First I will compare and contrast Camp Big Apple and Ranch West Camp. In compare, both camps learn math, English, and both camps have fun activities. In contrast, Camp Big Apple studies only SAT, and Ranch West Camp studies many subjects.

Second, I will compare and contrast Camp Big Apple and Head Start Splash. Both camps learn about English and have many activities. Camp Big Apple only studies about SAT and Head Start Splash studies many subjects.

Last, I will compare and contrast Ranch West Camp and Head Start Splash. Both camps stay in other countries, and have many subjects to study. Ranch West Camp stays only with students, but Head Start Splash stays with their family

In conclusion, what do you think is your best camp? My best camp is Ranch West Camp. It is very fun and we can choose subjects to study. I think these camps will be fun

Friday, 12 August 2011

skills post

Shark attacks(Summary)

Some people can get fear of shark when they go to the open ocean. Even you see shark, it will not attack you. It is more likely that you will be struck by lightning. Many people dies with strucking lightnings every year, but a few people get shark's attack. Moreover, many people get drown in beach. There are several ways to be safe at shark. Go beach with groups; because shark like to attack solitary swimmer. Or you have to get out of water if you have cut. Because shark has good sense of smell.

Bear attacks(Paraphase)last paragraph

There a few ways to be safe at attacked by bear. You have to hike with groups. Bears rarely attack people with 4 people in 1 groups or more. Or you have to be calm when you run into a bear. Because bears are likely to attack people who is running away.

Wednesday, 10 August 2011

optical illusion

Do you know optical illusion? It is interesting, but some people think it is dizzy to see.
I will show you the pictures
wow.. it will be dangerous.

l like this optical illusion!
I will publish more

Friday, 5 August 2011

WHAT THE WORLD EATS(United States)

Today, we bought many things in the shopping. But it is not things. It was food that our family will eat for a week. Wowww... I was so happy that I had spaghetti, chicken, pizza. These are my favorite food. I think this week will be best week for eating!!!!! My eyes are going to pop out! I'll be crazy. I want to eat some chips, coke... But my mom said eat fruit first. It was ok, because fruits are tasty, too.

I ate grapes, and then I ate apple. It was really tasty. And then, I ate chips with cokes. I thought I was eating in heaven. I ate breakfast with toast, sosage, french fries... I was so happy. I was so fuel, so I had to excersice. I rode my bicycle, and played soccer, I won from my dad! I think today is my luckiest day on my life.

I ate pizza and chicken nugets. It was so delicious. Also, I tried to eat one piece of pizza with a chicken nuget, like I put chicken nuget on my pizza, and I roll it, then I eat it! Do you think it will be taste like awesome? I had to do my homework. Then I could concentrate good. I thought it was 3:15, but it was 6:15. Our family ate spaghetti for dinner. I was so feeling good.

Thursday, 4 August 2011

MY story

Once upon a time, there was a dog named Jun-sup. He was trained by a owner named Jun-sup. The reason why Jun-sup(owner) named his dog as the same name, was Jun-sup thought he is bery similar to dogs. But the dog was smarter than owner Jun-sup, and the dog wanted to speak in order to teach his owner. It started to read books and learned to speak and it got better as the days passed. One day Jun-sup who is dog be able to speak. But it said big mistake that say to it's owner, "You are stupid". It didn't knew what that meant. Luckily, Jun-sup was dumb so he didn't know what that mean. But Jun-sup realized the meaning and he put his dog in toilet, flushed. But the dog alived. Then the owner Jun-sup was scared so he disappeared

Wednesday, 3 August 2011

compare and contrast(skill post1)

1. Camp big apple and Ranch west camp

Compare
  • Both camp has exciting activities.
  • Both camp's point is studying English.
Contrast
  • Camp big apple teaches SAT, Ranch west camp teaches many subjects.
  • Camp big apple students should study only for SAT, Ranch west camp students can learn what they want
  •  Camp big apple teacher is Korean, but Ranch west camp teacher is recent graduates form the local University.
  • Camp big apple students live in dorm, but Ranch west camp students stay in a home-stay
2. Camp big apple and Head start splash

Compare
  • Both camp has exciting activities
  • Both camp's point is studying English.
Contrast
  • Camp big apple teaches English for SAT, Head start splash teaches English for second language.
  • Camp big apple tours, but Head start splash lives in only one place.
3. Ranch west camp and Head start splash

Compare
  • Both camp has exciting activities
  • Both camp live in other place
Contrast
  • Ranch west camp just stay in home-stay, Head splash live with family
  • Ranch west camp can select subject, but Head splash only study English